08 September 2010

20 Scripts in 30 Days: Number 3 Ikiru by Akira Kurosawa





What would you do if you had six months to live? 

A lot of lousy movies have posed that question. Ikiru (To Live), by Kurosawa, is the rare a masterpiece that answers that question unblinkingly, and without a shred of sentimentality. It never yields to easy answers or cheap theatrics.


Watanabe is a faceless bureaucrat, a conformist, frugal, punctual, and, in many ways, already dead. Then, his doctors deliver the diagnosis, wrapped in a polite lie that Watanabe sees through.

Watanabe's a kind of Everyman who works through his upcoming death in ways that would probably be close to what we ourselves would do.


First, he looks for solace in his family. But as he sits in the dark waiting to tell his son, he overhears his son and wife complaining about living with him. 

He collapses, weeping in his bed.

Then, he seeks pleasure. In late middle age and with stomach cancer, drinking and whores aren't the answer either. Watanabe develops a relationship with a young woman from his office, which, of course, is misconstrued by everyone around him. He's drawn mostly to her youth and by the bubbling  life within her, but even that can carry him only so far.

Ultimately, Watanabe finds the answer himself. And this is where the movie is both resolute and about as unromantic as can be. The answer's not in some voyage or given by a guru on a mountain top. It's . . . doing his job. He helps a citizens group establish a park and a playground. He's indefatigable. He uses all his guile and all his energy in this project. He gets it built.


And then he dies.


The deputy mayor claims all the credit. His colleagues, a few of whom were inspired by his example, all fall back into their old habits. His son never really understands what his life was about, especially the last few months when Watanabe carved out a destiny of his own. Only a few of the neighborhood women truly care.


Watanabe's life and death are presented first from an individual perspective. We see him first in the context of of his office, his normal life. Then the story hones in on Watanabe's existential struggle.

But once he makes his decision -- the choice that will give his life meaning to himself -- his story is told in flashbacks and from many perspectives. We learn how hard he worked, and how his choice was seen by the people around him. It ends in a brilliant image: Watanabe on swing, just past the maze on the playground, a perfect symbol of his search for meaning, but as specific and everyday as the child's playground itself. 

This is yet another script that would reward close study. Its use of sound, in particular, lends concreteness and density to the story.


Kurosawa's script breaks any number of "rules" laid down in screenwriting books. He starts with a narrator. He uses flashbacks. He even, gasp, indicates what a character is thinking or feeling on the inside -- not often, but here and there.

It's bleak because it does not tell a single lie. It offers no refuge -- not in romance, hedonism, sentiment, or family. 


The only reward Watanabe can claim is that of the stoic, or the hero: the work itself. An act, undertaken in despair, pursued in the face of futility, doomed to be forgotten or misunderstood. And the act, once chosen, yields meaning and freedom. I'm still chewing on the theme, and probably will until I die, in one way or another. Reading this really hit me hard on every level. It makes Bonnie & Clyde seem like a well-crafted cartoon.

Ikiru, by Akira Kurosawa

07 September 2010

Happy Birthday, Elia Kazan

Today's the birthday of Elia Kazan, director and novelist.


From the ending of Viva Zapata:



Here's Christopher Plummer, talking about working with him.

Michael Caine and Natalie Wood


You know what he's saying?
"Thank you for the birthday wishes, darling. And last night . . . unforgettable."


06 September 2010

Art of the dissolve

Glenn Kenny's blog, Some Came Running, discusses dissolves.
Some readers were moved to cite their own favorite dissolves. A particularly persuasive citation, drawn from Orson Welles' 1941 Citizen Kane, by commenter Charles Hartney:"The scene in question occurs during Kane's first encounter with Susan Alexander, when she provides him hot water and he the necessary comic relief to alleviate her toothache. He starts to question her about her age, her occupation, what she wanted to be when she was little - "A singer," she responds sheepishly - and then asks that she sing for him in the parlor.
Susan begins to sing as Kane regards her approvingly, though her voice is tinny and her piano-playing unintentionally dissonant. It is here where Welles inserts a dissolve, and the resulting scene is very familiar: Susan at the piano, singing the same song, and Kane rapt with attention. But the scenery is changed: we are no longer in Susan's claustrophobic parlor, but in a more refined, capacious environment. Susan has changed as well: her dress is more elegant, her piano playing and singing smoother, more melodic, confident.
These elements suggest a number of narrative developments: a significant passage of time; that Susan has been given the freedom (see: money) to pursue her childhood dream of becoming a singer; and not only the continuation but the deepening of the relationship between Susan and Charles - he has obviously moved her into more luxurious surroundings.
Watching Kane for the I-don't-know-how-many-th time, it struck me what a formal marvel this transition was. To communicate so much with so little...astonishing."
Here are screen captures of the, let's say two-and-a-half shots in question:

"I also remember some very striking use of dissolves in SHANE [1953], in particular a sequence with Jack Palance crossing a barroom as he fades from the background into the foreground. It's a great touch which gives him and the sequence a suitable sense of menace..."
"...if I'm not mistaken Scorsese appropriated it for a similar effect in TAXI DRIVER [1976]..."


And there's Hitchcock:



There's quite a bit that's extraordinary here; first off, the rather staggering notion that Hitchcock is taking the idea of an answered prayer at 100 percent face value and absolutely unironically depicting one. And that's not the only reason that the word "Bressonian" springs to mind when considering this sequence; there's the lean, impassive face of actor Richard Robbins as the actual right man, that is, the guilty party of whose crimes Fonda's character has been unjustly accused. It's a very Bressonian face, at the same time as being rather absolutely American. I also like how Fonda's and Robbin's right eyes (left side of the frame) line up pretty much exactly at one point during the dissolved; boy, is that a purposefully locked-down camera(s), or what? In Hitchcock/Truffaut, the auteur under examination requests that Man be filed among "the indifferent Hitchcocks," and Truffaut protests, "I hoped you might defend the picture." It's easy to understand why. The quasi-documentary feel combined with a high level of very intelligent stylization, the psychological acuity and the unstinting perspective on the story's valleys of emotional bleakness—all these became signal features of Truffaut's The 400 Blows, and quite a few other movies of the French New Wave.




From Glenn Kennys' Some Came Running
Part One
Part Two

05 September 2010

20 Scripts in 30 Days Number 2: Bonnie & Clyde




An amazing read.

The script works along a series of contrasts. Scenes contrast with each other. Tender/violent; exhiliration/despair. The major characters all contrasts with each other as well: Bonnie and Clyde, the young, reckless and glamorous contrasted with Buck, Clyde's brother and his wife Blanche, the preacher's daughter. The tension between Bonnie and Blanche propel many of the scenes forward and show the inner stresses of the group. It's resolved, beautifully, when Bonnie takes care of Blanche after the penultimate shootout; she offers the shattered and wounded woman a pair of sunglasses -- which are both a mask and a form of protection. And when Clyde's sunglasses are half broken, we know he's going to be trouble.

Sunglasses are an important leit motif, along with other objects which are used skilfully to emphasize thematic points. They're everyday items, or tools essential to the character's lives. Apart from the scene above, they're deployed subtley.

Reading the script, as opposed to watching the movie, yields some angles I hadn't noticed when I've seen the movie. It's much more melancholy. They're actually failures as bank robbers; the one time they pull of a major hit, the bank's nearly empty of cash. The pair are more adolescent on the page, more like crazy, stupid teenagers. The charisma of the stars totally obliterates and subverts this. Plus, it reads well. I had a hard time putting it down. Each scene is economical; each carries a load, each sweeps the action along to it's inevitable, yet shocking, finale.

I plan on going back to this one and spending more time with it and the movie.



Bonnie & Clyde, written by David Newman & Robert Benton

The Rezillos: I Love My Baby Cos She Does Good Sculptures

03 September 2010

20 Scripts in 30 Days: Number 1 All Quiet on the Western Front



(The entire film is on YouTube)


All Quiet on the Western Front is a savage howl of a script, a bitter indictment of war and the culture that lets loose the mechanized violence. The screenplay is brilliantly constructed with characters that live, breathe, change and ultimately die senselessly, horribly, and absurdly for causes that in the immediacy of the front line are mere deadly abstractions. It's a completely radical work that calls into question the values that led to the war and the authorities in church, state and town that supported the war at the cost of millions of lives.


On the surface, All Quiet relates a simple story, and one that we've become familiar with through the hundreds of war movies that came later. Paul and his classmates volunteer in the early days of the war, urged on by a jingoistic schoolteacher. He and his schoolboy friends have some of their naivete kicked out of them during basic training. The town postmaster, Himmelstoss, turns into a petty dictator who sadistically drills them through exercises we know will be useless to soldiers in trench warfare. These scenes reminded me of the brutal training in Full Metal Jacket, or even in The Young Lions. But notably, in this script the cruelty comes entirely from the NCO.


The last phase of their initiation comes at the Front when they experience their first bombardment. There's a spectacularly Goth sequence as the bombs blast up corpses in the graveyard where they're sheltering. The rain of shells washes away any illusions the kids may have kept. From then on, the aim is survival. Kat, an older, more experience hand, takes them under his wing. We see battles -- with the French, with rats, with lice.


During his visit home, we see the scope of his psychological damage. As a student, we remember, Paul wrote verse plays. Now he can barely relate to his sister, his mother and his father. He hits the deck when he hears the screech of a streetcar, so much like shrapnel. He's completely destroyed inside, unfit for life even with a loving family to help him. Effectively, he's dead.


Finally, the only value that counts is the brotherhood among the soldiers. Even this is viewed without a trace of sentimentality: we see shirkers, petty thieves, a man trying to switch his broken helmet with another. Yet, the good ones help each other.


Each scene carries a charge which feeds inevitably into the following action. Each scene also has a point. Skillfully uses objects to visually move the story along: a pair of boots that gets passed along from character to character.


Notably, there's zero exposition. It's all showing, no telling. We get some information from Kat, for sure, but we learn it along with Paul, who's the audience's stand in. But the writers waste no time in moving us through the experiences that make up the movie.


Some of the elements have turned into cliches. The crusty old mentor, for example, or the martinet officer, or the kid who cracks up right away. But what struck me was how much more free the writers were in dealing with war. Perhaps it was because they were telling the story of the enemy army -- the defeated enemy. Or maybe we had a more developed culture back then, one that could see the humanity of our enemies and the absurdity of putting state directives over individual freedom.


We live in a country that's become as thoroughly militarized as Germany in 1914, with all the soldier worship that entails, and with all the lies to support it. I wonder if a similar movie could be made now. Eastwood pulled one off from the  Japanese perspective; it's on my list, now.


I had a hard time putting down the script itself. It reads well; the prose is lean and descriptive. They really knew their craft as well, with each scene building the action -- just like they tell you, it progresses very much along a dialectic progression: tension, conflict, resolution leading to a new tension carried on from the previous scene.


All Quiet on the Western Front, based on the novel by Erich Maria Remarque. Adapted by Maxwell Anderson, George Abbot, and Del Andrews.

02 September 2010

R.L. Burnside



R.L. (Robert Lee) Burnside — Born in Mississippi hill country back in 1926. Worked as a sharecropper, picked up the guitar as a young man, heavily influenced by bluesmen — Fred MacDowell, John Lee Hooker, Buddy Guy, and Muddy Waters (who was married to his first cousin). Burnside shook the Mississippi dust off his heels some time in the ’50s and headed for Chicago. Within a year, his Father, brother, and uncle were all murdered. He went back home to Mississipi where he ran into trouble himself — killing a man. ”I didn’t mean to kill nobody… I just meant to shoot the son of a bitch in the head. Him dying was between him and the Lord.” R.L. Burnside gained a huge following and critical acclaim finally in the ’90s when he teamed up with Jon Spencer, releasing the masterpiece — “A Ass Pocket of Whiskey.” Burnside died at the age of 78 in 2005. 


photo, text via

Writers exposed!

Simone de Beauvoir


Patricia Highsmith



Of the two, I'd say Highsmith was the better writer and, in her own way, just as existential a thinker as de Beauvoir.
But, don't get the wrong idea and start sending me nakey pix of Gertrude Stein or, God forbid, Elizabeth Gilbert, okay? 


01 September 2010

Top idea

Here’s how I tell if someone is smarter than me– when they tell me something, I think to myself, “That makes perfect sense, and I never would have thought of it.”
Case in point:
I suspect a lot of people aren’t sure what’s the top idea in their mind at any given time. I’m often mistaken about it. I tend to think it’s the idea I’d want to be the top one, rather than the one that is. But it’s easy to figure this out: just take a shower. What topic do your thoughts keep returning to? If it’s not what you want to be thinking about, you may want to change something.
That’s Paul Graham, in his recent essay, “The Top Idea in Your Mind.”
Another part of his essay stuck out to me:
I’ve found there are two types of thoughts especially worth avoiding… thoughts about money. Getting money is almost by definition an attention sink. The other is disputes. These too are engaging in the wrong way: they have the same velcro-like shape as genuinely interesting ideas, but without the substance. So avoid disputes if you want to get real work done.
From The Anonymous Production Assistant's Blog

Small town noir


The mug shots on this site were all taken in New Castle, Pennsylvania, between 1930 and 1959, and were rescued from the trash when the town's police department threw them out. The information that has been used to reconstruct the stories behind the pictures comes mostly from old copies of the local paper, the New Castle News.

20 scripts in 30 Days

 image via

During September, I'm going to read 20 scripts. This is a task prescribed by some how to make films guide or another. At first, I thought it would be better to read one script 20 times. After all, I've read a fair amount of screenplays already.But, it seemed to make more sense when I thought about the screenplays I've been meaning to read. And the sheer repetition of the form together with the volume of exposure could be worthwhile. Just beat the greatness into my head. And, after all, I could spend October digging into my favorites.

I'll make some notes about my reading, because that forces you to think about the material. These will be notes to myself, to make sure I'm learning something and digesting the scripts, rather than just plowing through. 

And I'll be writing my own stuff as well, because this could turn into one of those massive diversions that seem important, but become a form of avoidance for doing some real work.
Let the reading begin.